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The primary target audience for the site is families seeking charter schools. My page is more on the parental side, where it tells you about family events and activities, what the school life is like, and the graduation requirements for each student.

I feel the page my group looked at was written for the correct audience. The title of it is “For Families,” and I believe that the content on the page makes it have the right audience.

Overall, I feel the amount of text is appropriate, other than the section on graduation requirements. I feel that all the section should have is the credits each student needs with the course next to it. Then they could have a link with all the exact details for it. Also, the headings do stick out, but I feel they could be in a better order. 

To improve the original page, I would reorganize the content into clear, user-friendly sections with headings like Family Engagement, Student Tools, Graduation Requirements, and School Policies. I’d also simplify the language for easier reading, add clickable buttons or links for key documents, and include visual elements like icons or banners to make the page more engaging and easier to navigate—especially for busy families looking for quick information.